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Eighteenth Annual

TANKA SPLENDOR AWARDS 2007
Sponsored by AHA Books


Congratulations to the

WINNERS WITH INDIVIDUAL POEMS

cherry blossoms
lost in the snow
wondering if I too
have bloomed
too early
                Megan Arkenberg

 

patching another
hole in my jacket
some days
even this heartbreak
feels secondhand
                Megan Arkenberg

 

cross country
in a vehicle packed
with suitcases
still plenty of room
for an argument or two
                Collin Barber

 

candlelight calm
in the eyes of a pumpkin . . .
I listen to my son
tell me a story
I once told to him
                Collin Barber

power out —
in the stack of bills
a Christmas card
addressed to a stranger
who lived here before me
                Collin Barber

 

all these questions
posed by your death . . .
sanderlings
probe the wave-washed zone,
scurry back from the edge
            John Barlow

 

a spring day
with no need
to exorcize the ghosts . . .
still the way in which the river
lets the cormorant go
            John Barlow

 

in spring
our bones recall
the birds
they might
have been
                Patricia Brooks

 

Day dreaming
the taste of the tea
on your lips
this fragrance of lime
between you and me
                Magdalena Dale

Chilly wind
on my windowsill
a sere leaf…
I wait uselessly
to hear again your steps
                Magdalena Dale

 

Autumn shadows
between sky and earth
a clump of trees…
on the winding road
my loneliness
                Magdalena Dale

 

paper wings
fanned out on the floor. . .
oh, brown moth,
how well you seem to bear
your silence
                JLDavis

 

my next home,
built among lean pines. . .
thinner
and thinner the desire
to make a name for myself
                JLDavis

 

in a room
just off the banquet
on election night -
the victor's teenage sons
stand in the dark
                Barry George

a piece
from another puzzle
not fitting in
I leave early
and enjoy my own friends
                Marty Grenfell

 

I'll always love
so many things about you
deeply hidden
the song bird in a coal mine
is heard by very few
                Kirsty Karkow

 

the philosophers
speak and write of Oneness. . .
this summer night
my bed yields to your weight
where is the need for words?
                Kirsty Karkow

 

half asleep
and mumbling sweet names
into a warm flank
I ask the Jersey cow
to please let down her milk
                Kirsty Karkow

 

scent of lilac
over the stone wall
so sweet and strong –
I forget your name
and cannot hear your voice
            Joseph Kleponis

brittle straw– 
so hard to recall
the tenderness
of spring promises
now gone to seed
                Jack Prewitt

 

not without joy 
this love for a son
now dead–
a field of wild oats
close-mown in spring
                Jack Prewitt

 

orange poppies
lean in the rain
yes, pour more coffee
everything but watching
your garden can wait
                Malinda Miller

 

the peaks
release their clouds
at sunset
the valley opening
to whatever comes
                Michael McClintock

I'm sending you
a small basket of strawberries
with a few lilies . . .
remember me kindly
on the day they arrive
                Michael McClintock

 

 

With my fingernail
I scrape sweet potato
From a plate
Mind as absent
As you are
                Grant D. Savage

Lifting off
An egret drags its feet
In its reflection
A little longer
In its own beauty
                Grant D. Savage

 

noon rain storm –
this cotton shirt
still carries
the curve
of your waist
                Laurence Stacey

road trip
to Charleston
embracing
my sibling role
as a pillow
                Laurence Stacey

 

fresh rain
dampens our tent –
you sleep on
unaware of the weather
in my heart
                Michael Dylan Welch

chicken tracks
across the farmyard –
you tell me
of your son's trip
to Mongolia
                Michael Dylan Welch

our new car is an automatic
and I miss the stick,
the way I used to
grab your knee
on purpose
                Michael Dylan Welch

 

Congratulations to the

WINNERS WITH SEQUENCES

CAROUSEL
Julie Thorndyke

park bench
painted rainbow colours
like a carousel
but today it isn't
my turn to ride

the hand I hold
belongs to an auntie
she was the one
who buckled my shoes
this morning

on tiptoes
I’m still not tall enough
she lifts me
to peer at mum
through the fly screen

my mother's
familiar face is dimmer
she holds
the flannelette bundle
I may not be near

 

DANCING TO A NEW RHYTHM
Moira Richards

another year
another birthday
same old me
but for the jasmine
but for the season 

menopause
my body and I
dance
as two strangers
to the new rhythm

I watch ...
the spring tide washes
foamy waves
up, up the beach
leave it untrod again 

so pretty
in the bathroom mirror
as I clean my teeth,
those sparks of silver
on my mouse brown hair 

zinnias
and coriander
can one sow
flowers enough
to hold the weeds at bay? 

the jewel colours
of my new pashmina
I drape it
to feel the warmth,
feel as beautiful 

 

ROUND FACES & NESTING DOLLS
anya
Alexis Rotella

Traditionally
on garbage day, we smash
our egg shells . . .
no boats for wrong-doers
to cross the Atlantic.

 

Leaving Vespers early
we look up from
the STOP sign—
a fire ball cutting
across the velvet sky.

 

A lengthy toast
to our visitor who strikes
the Yule log . ..
sparks fly, and next year's
crops will be bountiful.

 

Our old priest
planting geraniums
in the cemetery;
a cloud of gnats
encircles his head.

 

Through the dome,
that hill where we played
as children—
for us there will always be
multiple sets of parents.

 

A fog of frankincense—
my fainted brother,
the altar boy
carried out for fresh air
in the arms of an elder.

 

Community Hall:
a young keeper pours only
for those who perform;
our entire choir gathers
'round the end of the bar.

 

Christmas Eve Kubas*— (*carolers dressed as kings and shepherds)
throwing back shots
of whiskey;
Mother's walnut rolls
have also disappeared.

 

Serenaded
by the gentleman she’s
about to marry . . .
sharing Slivovitz* with buddies— *(plum brandy)
he's a confirmed bachelor.

 

A fist fight
breaks out at the wedding—
the female
they're fighting over
pretends not to be flattered.

 

Our funerals,
the newspaper calls them
"real uppers" . . .
but to celebrate life/living—
for us this is normal

 

Returning from the woods
with a barrow full of humus
for our garden
and a wreath of tea berries
to surround the Paska.* (*Easter bread)

Hristos Voskrese* !— (*He is Risen!)
we color eggs coal-black
for the bone yard,
no relatives excluded—
not even those deceased.

 

Stillborn cousin
buried at the far end
of the grounds . . .
her name was Rachel,
but there is no stone.

 

Crows on a thatched roof—
to protect the nursling,
an evil-eye bead
from childhood memories
carried with me still.

 

Walking home from school,
I meet an old lady
on the back street
who says "girls who wear red
keep company with Satan.”

 

Baptism:
renouncing the Serpent,
Great Grandfather
Is still the one who spits
Into midair the furthest.

 

Kept in Mother’s trunk
all these years . . .
my christening dress
with the wine spot,
along with a lock of my hair.

From our pantry
a stench of cabbage
fermenting—
russet potatoes hold down
the lids on the crocks.

 

Islands
of sour cream float
on the borscht*— (*beet soup)
with leftover skins I stain
my eleven-year old lips. 

 

National troupe—
a male dance performed
before the crowd;
women with fake mustaches,
out-dance their menfolk.

 

Meeting another
papinki* hunter (*mushroom)
in the thicket,
we each go off
to our secret cache.

 

For Holytide,
a customary oak tree
felled by *tata— (*father or dad)
I pocket the first chip
for mama’s morning cream.

 

Julian Christmas—
its spirit arrives,
soft red and green
reflections sink
into freshly fallen snow.

At long last
the first white crocus
surfaces
again as if by magic,
we’ve survived a harsh winter.

 

Baba* walking down (*grandma)
from the house on the hill;
in her arms,
an aluminum milk can
filled with fresh pierogis.

 

Kneading dough
by hand, no electric mixers
in this kitchen! . . .
it gives us much more time
to sip the reducing wine. 

My aunt, the soprano,
and uncle, basso profundo
just put up
with each other, but on Sundays
they harmonize like nightingales.

After the battles,
silent kolos* still done (*circle dances with no music)
by everybody,
but for our elderly . . .
the reasons are different.

On a stroll
through the park
I tell
Father Yankovich’s daughter
how babies are made.

Tri-colored ribbons
circle the beeswax candles
in our Wheat—
an inch a day higher
of New Life to come.

 

Uncle Fred
lugs in a wooden barrel
with salt herring;
the smell of ocean
filling our cellar.

 

For His birth,
baked in our braided bread, 
a lucky dinar— *(coin)
this year, my third sister
returns it to the Icon.

 

Boiling mushrooms
we drop a dime
in the water
checking to make sure
it doesn't turn black. 

 

Paschal kisses—
like a moth drawn to
the flame,
our city-mouse niece
scurries from boy to boy.

 

In my blue skirt
made from an umbrella,
the tortoise shell nibs
still attached—
I twirl away the summer.

 

From a dark pew
stepping into bright sunlight
the clergyman’s wife
exclaims to an outsider
"you have the wrong color eyes!"

Greens!
from fresh scallions
chopped
into the leaf lettuce . . .
finally a taste of spring.

 

Saint George's Day:
teenage lads with foilage
over their ears . . .
maidens "gathering the dew”
to wear in their head scarves.

 

Horseradish
for the Resurrection baskets,
and baby beets . . .
enough to share with 
everyone on our street.

 

Hot purple
on every person’s tongue, 
each hoping
for merciful compassion . . . 
praying for great romances. 

 

The Bishop
comes to bless out house
and being "human"
forgets to lift up
the toilet seat. 

 

August sun
on dozens of balding heads
at Dad's funeral—
each one named John or Peter,
followed by a Jr.

 

The latest
in car ornaments . . . 
crocheted balls
and a penis,
hidden from us kids.

 

In the Old-country
even butterflies are blessed
with a soul—
mysteries of the universe
we accept as God’s truth. 

 

Each of my toes
has its own personality:
four babushkas* (*elderly women)
huddle together while
the thumb plays man of the cloth.

 

In front of our house
getting off the school bus,
always a whiff
of something—today it's
eggplant and skinless bell-fruits.

 

And tomorrow, golden
blini* with farmer cheese; (*crepes) 
with a glass
of creamy kefir* * (cultured milk)
to chase away the bugs. 

 

Papa’s dank barn
hung with raftered meats,
we close our eyes
to sniff garlic paprikas
feel the flames from a bellows.

 

Shooting stars—
I sit on the stoop with
my nesting dolls,
while inside our house
three generations playing cards. 

 

Seedtime:
new wives hang their bed-gowns
on fruit tree boughs . . .
how many male heirs shall
someday grace their futures? 

 

Summer days—
dragging ourselves
out of bed
to go to Russian school
to learn the Old Slavonic.

 

Noise to scare
the enemy away . . .
long nights spent
stitching little brass bells
into all our petticoats.

 

Great Aunt Tatiana
sews a red sun-suit for me,
one for my doll—
and we each get
a small apple pie.

 

Leaving the party
with treasures in our pockets,
nema problema* . . . (*no problem)
the hostess already knew
gypsies would steal her ashtrays. 

 

The Bogey Man
walks out of the woods
searching
for little children
to spit-roast and eat.

 

On his white steed,
I recall the heroic
folk tale of Marko,
smitten with a forest vila*— (*nymph) 
companion to all good men.

 

Mother left him 
at the altar—
he was raised Orthodox
but not a believer
and that would never work.

 

Ice cream social:
a stamp on the forehand
to get back in . . .
only the prison camp
survivors refused it.

 

Bingo night—
at the Polish church,
that woman
with a brogue is on
another winning streak.

For forty days
after his departure
we set a place
for our dearly beloved
at the supper table.

 

A cook for the Czar, 
Grandma comes to America
not expecting to meet
on a sidewalk in New York,
the young man she married.

Serbian kafa,* (*strong coffee)
3 times to a rolling boil
for the Trinity . . .
the Holy Spirit bubbles
over onto our clean stove.

 

A piece of bread
dropped on the floor . . .
I pick it up
and kiss it, before
tossing it out to the birds.

 

On New Years,
we honor the piglet's skull
with its apple . . .
I explain circumcision
to a non-informed friend. 

 

With a knife
from her apron pocket
Grandma cuts off 
the head of a sunflower . . .
will the rooster be next?

 

After his father,
and a second generation
coal miner . . .
he stencils O-VICH* (*o-vich=son of)
on hand-me-down work clothes.

 

Three brothers
share their lunch with rats . . .
the four-leggers
who once warned
them of a cave-in.

 

Eyeballs popped
out of every roasting lamb 
what sport! . . .
a colorful childhood
to say the very least.

 

Going to visit Aunt Mary 
I wear my prettiest dress . .
the one she bought me
when I was in the hospital,
the one with the rainbow slip.

 

Funeral parlor:
my Godfather Ivan laid out
for the viewing—
his widow an x- beautician
tangles a comb in his hair. 

 

My grandparent's
ivy-covered smoke house
puffing away—
the smells in our town 
during Holy Week!

 

Up the mountain
carrying bread and sheep curd
for lunch—
my fellow climbers ask
"What died in your backpack?" 

 

Never much cared
for green peppers
until Cousin Carol
invited me over
to her house for hajaja.* (*fried green peppers & onions)

 

One afternoon,
we collect red cabbage leaves 
at the market,
pushing our cart right on by
those commercial dying kits.

 

Monday morning—
the day my mother washed
and cleaned . . .
I too reserve this day
for matters of the moon.

 

Head of the household
rose sachet and moth balls
in the drawers;
woolen socks embroidered
with blue forget-me-nots.

 

In her morning tea,
a swirl of strawberry jam—
no other kind
would do since that was how
the Czarina took hers.

 

Rites of Equinox
new lovers frolicking
in old-growth—
pagans before Christians,
although in a rural sense.

 

From our fridge,
I give my friend some
Holy water
for her headache, and in minutes
she's praising the Lord.

 

Delivered
by the village doctor . . .
their offspring
generations apart, but
all with the same round faces.

 

In my nurse's kit
forgotten under our porch,
the woolly bears 
I picked for safe keeping,
have all turned to tiger moths.

 

In a long line,
Slav beauties on both sides
of the hotshot dancer;
acting like a legend, he
admires his own reflection.

 

Mesmerized when you said
your aunt once cut Elvis' hair,
how he oozed
with life force, how he ate
her pita* and asked for more. (*strudel)

Pineapple doilies
pinned on a drying board
in midday sun . . .
between Brownstone houses
the fragrance of laundry starch. 

 

The way I watched
old age creep in
on my mother's face;
now it's her turn
to watch my beauty fade.

 

Newfound freedom—
the Statue of Liberty
looms before us;
gazing upward, we wonder . . .
can men still sing in the streets?


AFTER WORDS
Jane Reichhold

The most striking feature of this year's winning poems is how many poets had multiple wins. Colin Barber, Magdalena Dale, Kirsty Karkow, and Michael Dylan Welch had all three of their submitted poems win. Seven authors had two winners and there were only five poets with one win each. I find this truly amazing and it tells me that certain writers who have mastered the genre can write winning poems on different subjects and in different ways.

This also tells me that winners are now being picked for the mastery of writing skills and less on the emotional pull of the subject matter of the poem. In other years, some poems garnered votes more on the basis of the topic or the poet's attitude toward the subject. This, the eighteenth contest, is finally able to point confidently to excellent writers of the form.

The winning sequence - "Round Faces and Nesting Dolls" by anya and Alexis Rotella is a collaborative linked tanka poem that has already been admired and picked up for publication in other magazines. It is a marvelous piece of work and is worthy of being a book all by itself.

Congratulations to each and every winner! I give my thanks to everyone who entered the contest and especially to those who took the time and effort to vote. I hope there was learning and education in every phase of the contest.

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