SEA SHELL GAME #34
Judged by Jane Reichhold
June 17, 2000
(a quickie, don't be picky because I am so far behind)
ROUND ONE
1
sugarflower sways
wisping under drifting clouds
our bus rushes past
2
Lonely wrinkled reflection,
Life gave two loves,
One was all she needed.
Ku # 1 wins.
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3
Winter cold
threatens existence
My hands numb
4
So small and tiny
she curls in my arms
and gently falls to sleep.
Ku # 3.
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5
kneading soft dough
for poppy seed rolls~
his freckled back
6
The scorching hot sun,
Cooks my flesh and hair slowly,
Until I'm well-done!
Ku # 5.
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7
late August-
the way the spider's web
bows with each gust
8
I am made of trees
Dancing beyond dimensions
Sneaking underground
Ku # 7.
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9
Lying on the floor,
stare at a box of Kleenex,
causes a headache.
10
balcony awning
billows in the gale then
cracks like a topsail
Ku # 9
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11
a serpentine slash
of sleek, autumn-coloured fur:
His Catness pounces.
12
Alone at sunset
she counts
each receding wave.
Ku # 11.
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13
When boat and shore meet
a thought comes
where does the wind begin?
14
I glance into the past
I wonder about the future
as i'm stuck in the present.
Ku # 13.
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15
Meditation, I alone
visit the silence within-
on my way to truth
16
smiles to herself
tending the potted posies
speaks to her children
Ku # 16.
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ROUND TWO
1
sugarflower sways
wisping under drifting clouds
our bus rushes past
3
Winter cold
threatens existence
My hands numb
Ku # 3
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5
kneading soft dough
for poppy seed rolls~
his freckled back
7
late August-
the way the spider's web
bows with each gust
Ku # 5.
---------------------------------
9
Lying on the floor,
stare at a box of Kleenex,
causes a headache.
11
a serpentine slash
of sleek, autumn-coloured fur:
His Catness pounces.
Ku # 11.
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13
When boat and shore meet
a thought comes
where does the wind begin?
16
smiles to herself
tending the potted posies
speaks to her children
Ku # 13
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ROUND THREE
3
Winter cold
threatens existence
My hands numb
5
kneading soft dough
for poppy seed rolls~
his freckled back
Ku #5.
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11
a serpentine slash
of sleek, autumn-coloured fur:
His Catness pounces.
13
When boat and shore meet
a thought comes
where does the wind begin?
Ku # 11.
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ROUND FOUR
5
kneading soft dough
for poppy seed rolls~
his freckled back
11
a serpentine slash
of sleek, autumn-coloured fur:
His Catness pounces.
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The winner is:
5
kneading soft dough
for poppy seed rolls~
his freckled back
..............................Kirsty
The winner is Kirsty! Again! Congratulations! and thanks to everyone who participated.
Poems Copyright © Individual Authors 2000.
Commentary Copyright © Jane Reichhold 2000.
Let me read another Sea Shell Game .
Show me the form so I can submit my haiku to the Sea
Shell Game.
Maybe I need to read up on haiku.