JAPANESE POETRY TERMS
Compiled by Jane Reichhold
Learning every word of this glossary will not guarantee to make you an
excellent writer. Trying to memorize it could lead to brain-strain and an
inability to speak intelligent English. However, a read-through can acquaint
you with some hints of the kind of thinking the Japanese have attached to their
poetry over the last 800 years. Your occasion to use most of these words in
daily speech will be fairly rare but being able to zing out a term or two is
invaluable in games of one-upmanship. The anglicized pronunciations are
approximate; considered as moderate tongue exercise.
ageku (AH-GAY-COO) -completing verse- The last stanza of a renga. The
link that attempts to summarize the whole work with a reference to the
beginning stanza.
aware (AH-WAH-RAY) - touchingness- The quality of an object to touch
one's emotions, often with pathos or sadness. Your native flag has aware;
another country's better designed flag does not have it.
Basho (BAH-SHOW) and not BASH-OH -banana tree- The pen name of the poet Matsuo
Yozaemon inspired by his delight in a such a plant given to him by a student to
be planted outside the window of his newest hut on the outskirts of what is now
known as Tokyo. Renga Master, Poet of Poets, Legend of
Japanese literature: Basho is now a common English-Japanese word that makes
people respond with the words, "Frog!" or "Autumn Crow!" in
the same way that "Thank you" brings forth "You are
welcome".
choka (CHOE-KAH) A long poem with the 5-7-5, 7-7 pattern of a renga
but done by one person. A favorite genre about a thousand years ago which has
enjoyed some revival at different times since.
dai (DAY'EE) Meaning topic, which in the poem which is either noted
in the first stanza or in a preface. It also means that the poets have decided
to agree to have a topic for the poem.
daisan (DAY'EE-SAH-N)-the third- In renga, the third stanza which
ends, in English, with a verb - often a gerund [ending in -ing].
dokugin (DOE-COO-JEAN) A solo work or renga written by one person.
gojuin (GO-JEW-EEN) A 50-link renga.
gunsaku (GOO'N-SAH-KOO) - group work- A group of poems on one subject
which represents various viewpoints while each part can be read as a complete
whole. In spite of the name, it can be done by one person.
ha (HAH) The 24-link "body" or middle part of a kasen
renga. The renga is divided into three parts. The first page and those six
stanza are the jo. The last page and those six stanza are the kyu. Each
has different attributes. The ha is characterized by many shifts in
scene and more non-seasonal verses (talking more about people and less about
the weather).
haiga (HI-GAH)-painting- Brush and ink drawing done to accompany a
handwritten haiku or hokku. It is usually a rough sketch, slightly abstract or
simplified in style like a cartoon.
haigon (HI-GO'N)-haikai words- Words not allowed in serious poetry
meaning those words in foreign languages or those too vulgar for polite
company. Such expressions used in haikai writing are signposts of the
genre.
haijin (HI-GIN) - haiku or haikai person- A haiku poet or a crippled
person. I kid you not.
haikai (HI-K'EYE) - humor or joke or unusual- A designation for
humorous poems which was later used to substitute for the phrase
haikai-no-renga which as become a generic word for any poetry in this vein.
haikai-no-renga (HI-K'EYE-NO-RAY'N-GAH) - comic renga- In Basho's
time it meant vulgar, earthy renga, full of satire and puns, which was the
dominant mode at that time. When Basho spoke of his work, this is what he
called it.
haiku (HI-COO)-a verse of haikai- Thus it originally meant a
verse taken from a renga, but in this century, it was coined by Shiki to be
synonymous with hokku. From this came the idea that haiku had to have
the elements of the hokku, a kigo and a kireji, but most
important was the linking of images completely within the three lines without
relying on connections with other elements to make a completed thought.
Also it was to be uplifting, edifying, profound, and not fun. Modern poets have
reverted back to writing haiku which could have been the stanza from any part
of a renga. Also, in Japanese, the singular and plural are the same: the sheep
are and the sheep is so there are no haikus or rengas.
haimi (HI-ME) A refined quaility in haiku.
hana no ku (HAH-NAH-NO-COO) The flower stanza in renga.
hankasen (HAHN-KAH-SAY'N) Half of a kasen or an 18-stanza renga.
hibiki (HE-BEE-KEY) -echo- Term used when two stanza reflect images
closely or relate in the same way.
hiraku (HE-RAH-COO) The name for any of the stanza in a renga which have
no name -- those other than the hokku, ageku, etc.
hokku (HOE'K-COO) - starting verse- Name for the first stanza of a
renga. As poets jotted down hokku against the day when they might be
called upon to start a renga without preparation, there came to be collections
of only beginning verses. Later, in this century, since Shiki, hokku were
called haiku, even in
honkadori (HOE'N-KAH-DOE-REE) A stanza that has borrowed (heavily?)
from literature or refers to a commonly known incident from past writings or
writers. The license to steal.
hyakuin (HE-YAH-COO-EEN) - one hundred verse - A term for a renga
which was that long. Before Basho shortened the renga to 36 stanza, this was
the usual length.
kaishi (KAY-EE-SHE) - pocket paper - Small, slim sheets of paper used
for writing poems. Implies why one should always have them available and their
alternate purpose. Achoo! kaishi!
kaori (KAH-OH-REE) - scent or fragrance - A term for the relationship
between stanza in which both evoke the same feeling with very different images.
Both a puppy lost in the rain and a newly divorced man might have kaori.
karumi (KAH-RUE-ME) - lightness - The quality in writing that Basho
encouraged, especially in his later years. Here it meant the beauty of ordinary
things spoken of in a simple way. This was the end of puns and word play which
was so dear to the hearts of renga writers. Kikaku, his most brilliant student,
left him at this point, feeling that karumi lacked challenge and
sparkle. People still argue about the concept three hundred years later.
kasen (KAH-SAY'N) - immortal poets - Meaning the 36 immortal poets of
kidai (KEY-DAY'EE) - season topic - A condition that designates a
season by agreement among poets which makes the full moon a sign of autumn. As
this path is full of potholes and debates, there are dictionaries called saijiki
which are devoted to the sport and explain little with many words.
kigo (KEY-GO)-seasonal word- Nouns which imply the season because
they have been traditionally associated with certain times of the year in
Japanese literature and/or real life. There are winter bird and summer plants,
spring activities and winter skies, fall trees and summer holidays and the list
goes on and on. Is a red balloon an indication of summer or fall? Look it up.
kyoka (QUE'YOE-KAH) - a mad poem - The tone and feel of a limerick
written in tanka form and just as bawdy. Often the subject is about poets or
the writing of poems which makes fun of both.
ku (COO)-verse- Terse or worse.
kuzari (COO-ZAH-REE) - suspension - The lapse of a number of stanza
between the use of certain words. For example, there should be eight stanza
between the use of "dream". And "insects" should be used
only once in 100 verses. By the way, the word 'woman' was not allowed to be
included in a renga in the 15th century.
iisute (EE-SUE-TAY) A short sequence with an irregular number of stanza
or a renga which has ended in the middle because your partner has left town and
no forwarding address.
jo (JOE) The beginning six stanza of a renga which are characterized by
a calm preparatory stanza using many season words. Someone has compared a renga
to a social evening. The jo is like the first half hour when everyone is
politely getting acquainted, still talking of the situation that has brought
them together -- the weather, the host's house, furnishings, the food, how
lovely everyone looks. The ha or 24-link body is the conversation over
dinner when the wine has soaked in. The kyu are those disconnected phrases
one hears while saying good-bye, thanks, and don't forget and remember when.
maeku (MAH'EE-COO) - previous verse - The preceding stanza. The one
to which another author is expected to add a verse.
maekuzuki (MAH'EE-COO-ZOO-KEY) - joining to the previous verse- A game
resulting from renga writing in which one person, usually a poet, writes a
maeku and someone (or each member of a group) responds with a tsukeku.
It can be a contest with the poet then choosing a winner. A maeku plus a
tsukeku is a tan renga, the shortest possible kind. The maekuzuki
is a sadly neglected practice at the moment, but still it has great
possibilities for the enjoyment of linkage on a competitive basis. You can
investigate the form and try it out at Maekuzuki.
mankuawase (MAH'N-COO-AH-WAH-SAY) - collected verses - An anthology
of the winning tsukeku (verses) written in a maekuzuki.
and a mouthful of "rad" and "max" has
onji (OH'N-GEE)- sound symbol - An archaic Japanese word American haiku
writers were misinformed about. For years we used the word which no one in
oriku (OH-REE-COO) Acrostic renga. Here is something almost no one
has explored in English except John Cage. Not joking.
renga (RAY'N-GAH) - linked elegance- The Japanese poetry form in
which three-line stanza of 5-7-5 on are linked to a two- line 7-7 on,
usually written by two or more persons. Renga baffle Westerners because as a
poetry form it lacks a narrative, actual time sequence, and doesn't seem to be
doing anything except jumping all over the place. The secret is the linking
between images within a stanza and in the empty places between the stanza. Once
you learn to appreciate this you can be made to believe anything.
rengaawase (RAY'N-GAH-AH-WAH-SAY) A renga contest.
renku (RAY'N-COO) - ren = linked ku = verse - A
term invented in the 1740s in
rensaku (RAY'N-SAH-COO)-linked work- A sequence of haiku or tanka
wherein each stanza is dependent upon the previous one for meaning.
ryogin (RE-YOE-JEAN) A renga written by two authors.
sabi (SAH-BEE)-aged/loneliness- A quality of images used in poetry
that expresses something aged or weathered with a hint of sadness because of
being abandoned. A split-rail
fence sagging with overgrown vines has sabi; a freshly painted picket
fence does not.
sangin (SAH'N-JEAN) A renga written by three authors.
sedoka (SAY-DOE-KAH) An old verse form used in the 7th century
consisting of matching stanza, using a question and answer method to reveal
riddles. Considered the forerunner of renga.
senku (SAY'N-COO) A 1,000 link renga. In practice, it is composed of
ten hyakuin or hundred-link renga in one poem. The only one I know of in
modern times was conducted by Heinz Kurz in
senryu (SEN-YOU-RUE) - river willow - The pen name of the most
famous poet who conducted maekuzuki (linking contests) has been given to this
genre in his dubious honor. Because haiku and senryu are written
much alike, often on the same subjects and usually by the same authors, great
controversies have ensued over which is what. For a time, in
shibumi (SHE-BOO-ME) 1) A favorite flavor of ice cream 2) An
acrobatic feat accomplished while dancing backwards on roller skates 3) A
description of poetry typifying subdued, classical, or astringent images.
Cracked whole wheat flour muffins without oil, eggs, preservatives, additives
or coloring as compared to oven-ready frozen croissants.
shinku (SHE'N-COO) - closely related - Two stanza that are related by
images that fit closely together. As opposed to soku.
shiori (SHE-OH-REE) - bent/withered - A delicate, pathetic quality for an image. Not often
talked about. The term can be of use in describing a partner's link.
Shomon (SHOW-MOAN) The name of Basho's school of renga which was
located where he was no matter where he was. His competitor was the Danrin
school. Basho's teaching is considered to emphasize the profound, reverent way
of relating to the world while still having humor and certain oddities.
soku (SO-COO) - distantly related verse - Two links in which made you
wonder if the authors were working on the same renga.
sono mama (SO-NO MA-MA) 1)The world's best renga writer, assuming she
is a woman 2) as it is - To present an image without flourishes or
embellishment.
tanka (TAH'N-KAH)-short poem- Consisting of 31 sound units in five phrases of
5-7-5-7-7, this lyrical form has existed since earliest recorded Japanese
literature. Along the way it has also been called uta or waka. In
many ways it is like the first two stanza of a renga or is a tan renga written
by one person. For writers who find haiku too plain and lacking in emotion, the
tanka is a great way to express feelings and let your love live. The trick is
to not sound sentimental and this is usually done by anchoring the thought in
the reality of the natural world.
tan renga (TAH'N-RAY'N-GAH) -short linked elegance- A renga
consisting of only two linked stanza of 5-7-5 and 7-7, but written by two
people.
tsukeai (T'SUE-KAY-AH-EE) - joining together - Linking of verses or
linked verses or a renga or a sequence.
tsukeku (T'SUE-KAY-COO)- linked verse - The second stanza or the one
which is linked.
tsuki no ku (T'SUE-KAY-NO-COO) Moon stanza. In the kasen renga this
feature occurs at links #5, #14, #27 - if everyone is paying attention. It is
snazzy to shift this link forward by one stanza when writing of an 'early' moon
or the opposite if someone realizes the moon is missing..
ushin (UU-SHE'N) - with heart - See
utsuri (UU-T'SUE-REE) -reflection- The relationship between renga
stanza where there is a sense of movement or transference.
wabi (WAH-BEE) - poverty - Beauty judged to be the result of living
simply. Frayed and faded
waka (WAH-KAH) Five-line poem also called tanka, uta, and
other things when the lines won't link properly.
wakiku (WAH-KAH-COO) - side verse - The official name for the second
link in a renga.
yongin (YOE-JEAN) A four-partner renga.
yoyoshi (YOE-YOE-SHE) A 44-stanza renga.
yugen (YOU-GAY'N) - mystery - A word describing poetry which is so
mysterious that many volumes have been written to explain it. One could say a
woman's face half-hidden behind a fan has yugen. The same face
half-covered with pink goo while getting a facial, however, does not.
zuiga (ZOO-EE-GAH) The extra 50 stanza composed on the 5th day of
writing a senku. Sounds like it was quite a renga party!
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Copyrighted © by Jane
Reichhold in 1993.
Previously published in Lynx.